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Ready to die or live?
Contributed by
crazylady
on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:12:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Facing my fears
Living my dreams
Dreams or Nightmares?
tell myself no more shall I
hurt myself or others nearby
But i cant help it
scared to die
yet scared to live...
ready to give
all i can give
Sooo ready to die
....yet.........ready to live....
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crazylady
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2005-03-04 18:12:00]
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Re: Ready to die or live?
(User Rating: 1 )
by nabokovfan87 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:29:43 PM AEST
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| seems like the rhyme scheme is forced. next time u write try to just let the words come out as they want. dont try to make it seem perfect the first time through it usually takes a few fixes to get a decent write. gl though keep at it.... |
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Re: Ready to die or live?
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by LadyWynter on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 07:48:45 PM AEST
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I know how hard the struggle not to cut is, I can really relate to this piece. Even now, with so much to be thankful for, I still fall back into it. Be strong, I wish you all the best.
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