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I Wont Give In..
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
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Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 05:17:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You can still use me if Im broken
One door closes, but another opens
I have faith for the future
Yes, I'm still hoping
And I still have my mind
I haven't completely crossed the line
But Im starting to give up
Cause its you I cant find
Im pushing closer to the edge
Walking along this narrow ledge
Forget the promises
Forget my pledge
I dont care that you're gone
I'll still sing my song
I'll hold my head up high
Til the world falls
Have you no shame
For your wicked game?
I'm throwing in the towel
I wont play
So hate me for who I am
I really don't give a damn
You don't hold my leash
You're just another man..
Copyright ©
Daniels_Princess
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2005-03-04 17:17:10]
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Re: I Wont Give In..
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by nabokovfan87 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:31:19 PM AEST
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| nice thought but could be stronger. read it over and change a few words..... |
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Re: I Wont Give In..
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:40:01 PM AEST
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| Good write. I liked the ending. Nice work. |
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Re: I Wont Give In..
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 11:46:57 PM AEST
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Seems really positive. Great job hehe.
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