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Prisoner of Blood
Contributed by
the_fallen
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Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 03:29:44 PM in AEST
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I sit still in the red water as it rise and others die
The blood reaches my knees as I stare in regret
Tears of blood fall down my cheeks
As I feel the pain of others held in the red waters
Chained to the ground, I’m not allowed to wonder off very far
The water reaches up my neck and I stand up
The red water is at my hips, but my body is stained with blood
The water continues to rise, until it drowns me
Chained to the ground I’m not allowed to swim up for air
I’m drowning in blood, but I don’t die
I’m still alive…I’m still alive…
But still I remain a prisoner of blood
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the_fallen
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2005-03-04 15:29:44]
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Re: Prisoner of Blood
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by Rylo on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:20:09 PM AEST
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| This was a really great read, I like your style. |
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Re: Prisoner of Blood
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 07:41:06 PM AEST
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very vivid and dark. My only complaint is that
it is to short you left me hungering for more. I
hope to see more stuff by you soon. Once
again an awesome write.
Bobo (Joel) |
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