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In the end, its Nature who laughs
Contributed by
Nardo
on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 02:02:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sun light warms the Siren shores
the beautiful place where birds sing.
Petals upon petals forming prism light
a congress of colors, if you will.
The great city of Emerald's frown upon her breasts
heaving hills in luscious Greens
not even these colors exist over the rainbow.
The Ocean's belly rumbles
as she purges the creatures from her gut
the water way of life as they reach the shore
and plant a seed
the Seed of Life
to Grow and GRow and GROw and GROW.
This is the place where Nature takes back
what is rightfully Hers.
The Land
The Water
The Sky
now birds of prey to the human race
in our venomous Midas Touch
our search for Earth's wealthy blood
and to imprison the land in a concrete
straight jacket.
Copyright ©
Nardo
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2005-03-04 14:02:25]
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Re: In the end, its Nature who laughs
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by nabokovfan87 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:47:37 PM AEST
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| decent write but can be improved easily. try just making a flow and keeping it the whole way through. dont get a read attached and them force them to refocus. anyways. keep at it.... |
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Re: In the end, its Nature who laughs
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 03:35:47 PM AEST
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| Loved all the things you had to say here. Humans are so unkind to our Mother Earth. I am ashamed. I wish more folks thought about these things. Glad you are one of the folks that do. Much peace. Laura |
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