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The Race Between Me and the Devil
Contributed by
the_fallen
on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:50:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I have to win, I have to win
The lost is too high
If I don’t win I’ll lose everything
Everything to me
My family, my friends, my heart, my soul
I have to win
I have to win this race
To save everybody, to save the world
Racing against the devil
Racing for the world
I run until I can’t run no more
I cross the finish line and a victory at last
I won the race, I won the race against the devil
I save the world, I saved my family and my friends
I saved my body, my heart, and my soul
I destroyed the devil
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the_fallen
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2005-03-04 13:50:34]
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Re: The Race Between Me and the Devil
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by nabokovfan87 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:40:10 PM AEST
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| um try to develop some type of a stpry instead of just running. seems to busy and undetailed..... |
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Re: The Race Between Me and the Devil
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by Channing on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 04:01:13 PM AEST
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Good idea, but seems rushed and spread far to thinly. Better luck next time!
-Channing- |
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