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free write
Contributed by
jillian_phan
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Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 12:36:49 PM in AEST
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well, once again, the person everyone says whom knows love so well,
fell slightly for another again,
once again i am hurt, and experiencing what i think is love, and doubt and all the mess with it..
and once again i am used and put off on the side, i
knew i was not coming on strong, but what was it but alright,
i suppose all of it was worth nothing...
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jillian_phan
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2005-03-04 12:36:49]
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Re: free write
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:10:21 PM AEST
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Awww a beautifully sad write here. I don't really know what else to say... its expressive, powerfully emotional and insightful. I hope things work out...
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Re: free write
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:39:40 PM AEST
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a beautiful write though sad such a lucid veiw
of the heart betrayed by love, once again i'm
enthralled by your style of writting . . .
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