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The Color Black
Contributed by
ramfire
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Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 10:35:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Deep black like the night and no moon
Somber dirgeful grave morose tune
Ebon flower dahlia's late bloom
Pretty blossom
Place where stone crypt's by near cold tomb
Life's gone awesome
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2005-03-04 10:35:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Color Black
(User Rating: 1 ) by Red_October on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 12:10:42 PM AEST (User
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it's this fascinating mix of words stronger than what it looks like at first glance. i liked this muchly. Tiffany J. |
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Re: The Color Black
(User Rating: 1 ) by helianthus on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:11:52 PM AEST (User
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This is very vivid. It reminds me of the Crow. Beautiful but sad. Lovely nonetheless. Lisa |
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Re: The Color Black
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:15:10 PM AEST (User
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An incredible write, very well done.
Take Care
- Becca |
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