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love and hate
Contributed by
gizmo
on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 10:20:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i had a funny dream last night,
that everything was alright,
but the weird thing about it you see,
is there was no you, there was no me.
i'm empty and i'll never be filled,
i've been permanently spilled.
i want to run and hide
cause there's a hole inside that i can see,
because there used to be you, there used to be me.
yoiu left me here standing all alone,
you should have let me know,
that it was time for you to go.
now i have all these feelings that i've never felt before,
wash over me with such great intensity that i thought i would hit the floor.
all this love, hate and memories will stay with me forever more,
until i rejoin you,
underneath the floor.
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gizmo
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2005-03-04 10:20:17]
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Re: love and hate
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by Red_October on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 12:21:53 PM AEST
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| Good poem in its emotional content, when i was finished reading, i wanted more of the story. Tiffany J. |
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Re: love and hate
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by Snuggles on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 11:17:05 AM AEST
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| hey babe great poam to put in there i love it |
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