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Meaning of the afterlife
Contributed by
BabyLuby
on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 04:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Worn shoes tread the path I fear. A desolate
chime of a far off clock ticks down the seconds....
Empty graves waiting to be filled by bodies that don't even exist.
Cold world shuts out the hurt that people cause to each other.
Couples with linked arms, glazed looks in their eyes
Walking upon sun scorched earth, to the light that the disillusionment causes them to believe in.
Nothingness consumes our everyday lives,
Hopelessly falling into a way we think we should be, the life that conformity has hand picked for each person.
Not wanting to be who we all have become.
Perhaps the empty graves are for the souls of people that cannot preserve them.
Lost should forever in another life
just yesterday’s dreams to keep us all going till the last grain of sand drops..........
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BabyLuby
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2002-12-16 04:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Meaning of the afterlife
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:29:39 AM AEST (User
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Wow....
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Re: Meaning of the afterlife
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:46:37 AM AEST (User
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This really makes you think! Great write! Christina |
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Re: Meaning of the afterlife
(User Rating: 1 ) by BabyLuby on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 01:16:32 PM AEST (User
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thanks a lot for ur comment, it means a lot, i should be posting more stuff soon
Hannah |
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Re: Meaning of the afterlife
(User Rating: 1 ) by wolfflow on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 02:57:03 PM AEST (User
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wow, yes, xlent poem |
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