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what i'm able to do
Contributed by
disturbed_silence
on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 10:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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take my hand
I will share,
my life,my hopes and my dreams
i put my trust in you
gave you my life when i was dead
gave you my last breath
in my death bed
now i'm in somewhere horrible
of your imagination
thinking of ways
to get out
i made a mistake
why i'm i so blind
is it because you took my sight
or is it because i'm innocent inside.
you let me take your hand,life,hopes and dreams
now am bringing you down with me
i hope you didin't forget
my sick and twisted mind
revenge is sweet
but seeing you dead is sweeter.
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2005-03-03 22:00:29]
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Re: what i'm able to do
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by sapphireshadow on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:16:37 PM AEST
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Me liki this one. "revenge is sweet, but seeing you dead is sweeter": if I didn't know you any better, i would think that you were talking about HIM.
I LOVE YOU!
PS. I am saying that in my creepy voice.
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Re: what i'm able to do
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:04:25 PM AEST
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this is so twisted i love it !! i love the last lines they are really the best,so horrid and evil, i love dark poems they really show talent
great poem,keep writing them !!
love han xx |
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