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because of you
Contributed by
vindicated_lozer
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Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 09:20:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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violent smiles and innocent guns
shining down on me radiantly
broken homes and upset dreams
seem to be everywhere you turn
not a happy face among the streets
the whole world is crashing down
all because of you, my love
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2005-03-03 21:20:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: because of you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:06:27 PM AEST (User
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Truly ingenius. This has to be on of my favourites. Its written to perfection, flows smoothly and my only complaint is the length... I want moreeeeee lol.
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