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Falling
Contributed by
MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa
on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:19:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I run upon a shining glass
A plate of solid black
I carry on my aching back, a world thats soon to crack
I glance down at my dark reflection,
then upon the moon
"why have you put this weight upon me?"
"Do you wish me to go so soon?"
Of course I am not answered
Simply left to drift
With this aching in my soul,
Why must I do this?
All the world around me
Is darkness to the core
and beneath my yearning soul
lie wounds my heart have bore
Within this glass I see myself
so lonely, hearts of lost defeat
Waiting for the glass to break
This weight to leave my feet
I only I were falling, tumbling down
no longer would I ache
But as I stand upon this ground
My mind begins to flake
As all of my good memories
slowly start to fade
They are replaced by sad ones
From my baddest days
I wonder why the one was me
Chosen for this day
And as I search on endlessly
I find that I'm too late
I feel these warming hands of life
that loosely grasp my frozen soul
Shaking to the core
And as I fall I realize
What all of this was for
I'll hear your lies, your sweet demise
And Tonight I've lost this war
Copyright ©
MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa
... [
2005-03-03 17:19:00]
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Re: Falling
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:26:24 PM AEST
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| nicely put and written! |
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Re: Falling
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:34:59 PM AEST
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| I agree. don't do anything too drastic, i want more of ur poetry |
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Re: Falling
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by darkremains on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 06:52:35 PM AEST
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| beautifully written. I relate to your melancholy |
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