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My shining star
Contributed by
lil_angel_eyes
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Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Star light, star bright
Mum I wish you were here tonight
I know heaven is where you are
But heaven to me is just to far
I know your watching behind each cloud
And I promise to make you proud
Can I meet you at heavens gate
Cause earth is only full of hate
If I saw you, you could tell me
How to end this life of misery
Tiny stars shining above
Each one of them spreading your love
And as long as those stars continue to shine
Showing me that someday ill be fine
I will pray each and every night
Hoping my mum is happy tonight
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2002-12-15 21:00:00]
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Re: My shining star
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:38:32 PM AEST
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How beautiful,just the way I feel ! I loved this,
Your mom is happy whewre she is & shes all ways around! Christina |
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Re: My shining star
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by Sarah22 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 12:46:29 AM AEST
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keep writing poetry
in the future :*). |
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Re: My shining star
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by peterdoswell on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 05:11:09 AM AEST
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| Quite a moving piece that I wish was a little bit longer it seemed to end too soon .Keep up the good work . |
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