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a woman
Contributed by
LEMOU
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Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:49:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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The she of he,
The mother of life,
The barrier of pain,
The creator of joy.
She is her, the woman.
Her beauty makes butterflies feel shy,
Her smile awakens wilted flowers,
Her touch heals the broken hearted ,
Her tears sparkles life,
Her eyes are the radiantly gloomy moon,
She is the woman, the queen of tenderness.
Everything about her is attractive,
Her body is made to be hold,
Here voice is created to make dreams reality.
The way she moves is like a fairytale,
Fantasy, A dance of attraction.
She has power over him, although
She is a weak vessel that needs to be handled with care.
She is her, the woman, the mother of mothers.
Copyright ©
LEMOU
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2005-03-03 05:49:47]
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Re: a woman
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:59:34 AM AEST
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What a beautiful composition, this was such a beautiful write.
I liked it a lot and the first stanza just stands out but overall the ending result was beautiful.
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Re: a woman
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 06:11:16 AM AEST
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Very beautifull.
Every women should enjoy this 'cause women jus don't hear something like this much or at least I've never heard it put so sweetly tender-n-luving.
A beautifull masterpeice.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: a woman
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by Naveen on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 06:29:15 AM AEST
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Thats really epitomises the powers of women in very artistic way, great written,
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Re: a woman
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by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 07:08:11 AM AEST
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| A beautiful, well written poem. |
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Re: a woman
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 11:33:22 PM AEST
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A lovely tribute 2 no better an insperation than
source of all insperation . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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