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Just Another Day
Contributed by
TikiGodAK
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Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:33:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm kicking
I'm screaming
I'm tired
I'm torn
Feel the pain
Feel the hurt
Feel the touch
Hear the cries
Watch the laughter
See the darkness
I can feel it.
I can feel it.
I can hear it.
I can see it.
I can see it.
I know I can...
The bittersweet lullaby...
Your soul yearns...
Your heart kicks...
Your brain spins...
Restless as the thorns press...
I lay...
Copyright ©
TikiGodAK
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2005-03-03 05:33:14]
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Re: Just Another Day
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:36:00 AM AEST
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. . . and just another comment from me, asking a newbie to heed the submission rules . . .
1 poem requires 3 comments. Thanks for listening. And welcome . . . |
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Re: Just Another Day
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 06:05:07 AM AEST
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Great work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Just Another Day
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by Dri on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:50:46 PM AEST
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this is really good, i liked the flow...
oh, and you really should go out and comment on people's stuff. it's really fun! plus, you kinda are obligated to keep the ratio... enter a poem, comment on three peoples poetry... but it's also really fun to give people feedback. just wanted to let you know. i know people are prolly harping you to comment, so thanks for listening to another busybody. |
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