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Light Secret Keeper
Contributed by
desireemiote
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Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 01:54:53 AM in AEST
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i reach for your kisses only because i want them
like stars they are many
but not so high
so far to stretch
though they are distant
buried in comfort
the comfort of nothing
no feeling
numb
yet there is a tingling
what is this
a feeling where there is none
a soft spot in the middle of a rock
there is always some spot left untouched by the past
carefully navigated
the present keeper of secrets can reach it
so run
with your lantern
but dont stomp
or you will be rejected
good night
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2005-03-03 01:54:53]
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Re: Light Secret Keeper
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by Scarlett on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 10:57:11 AM AEST
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i liked this, light and pleasant to read and flowed nicely.
the ending was good too! |
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Re: Light Secret Keeper
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:04:06 PM AEST
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| that was beautiful ...i loved it!^_^ |
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