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One Track Mind
Contributed by
Curtisc
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Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 01:36:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Ever since you came back to me,
I can't get you off my mind.
I know now we are meant to be,
the love we share is one of a kind.
All day I find myself thinking of you,
my thoughts never go astray.
I know exactly what I'm supposed to do,
but the question is, what will you say?
I really don't know how you feel,
but I hope it's similar to me.
It's your breath I wish to once again steal,
with you again is where I want to be.
You make me feel whole,
you make me feel complete.
You're the perfect match for my soul,
that's why life had us meet.
I could spend the rest of my life with you,
even if I have to wait five long years.
This is something I'm prepared to do,
because being without you is the worst of my fears.
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Curtisc
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Re: One Track Mind
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:40:31 AM AEST
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this is a sad poem i feel your desperation
i hope u get what your seeking my friend. . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: One Track Mind
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 08:09:59 AM AEST
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What a sad write, well writen and showing such deep emotions. Great write.
Hugs,
Jane xxx |
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Re: One Track Mind
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by Scarlett on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 11:02:12 AM AEST
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i liked the honesty and passion in this, could feel your sincerity. the rhythm was a bit out in some places but that's never my strong point either.
overall, a heartfelt charming poem. |
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Re: One Track Mind
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by O7NeVeS on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 12:51:21 AM AEST
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| I agree, it was a sad write, and i think some rhyming was a lil forced...but who cares...lol i love all ur stuff anyway, and i know she does too!! Tanya |
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Re: One Track Mind
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:24:04 AM AEST
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it is a very sad write.
I hope you get your wish. |
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