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I Will Find You
Contributed by
philly
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Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 01:29:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If ever a man loved a woman
Surely I for thee
Life without you is a lie
Thou art the better half of me
Our fates intertwined
The spiral of love-twisting down
I will never let you go
But in thine affection I shall drown
Cast all aside-the whole world
Our love is not of it
But greater than it all
So even the heavenly angels covet
Let me have thee
Let me take thee into the night
Whisk you away
On Wings of love-take flight
I seek thee, and have not found
Yet I will find thee
I will find thee
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philly
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2005-03-03 01:29:42]
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Re: I Will Find You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 11:06:55 AM AEST
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effective use of archaic language, it always seems to sound good in love poems. I liked this a lot but the rhythm being out was a bit distracting. Still, overall I liked the images i got from this
"Life without you is a lie
Thou art the better half of me" |
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Re: I Will Find You
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 11:53:23 AM AEST
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| The use of the language here made the poem that much better. I love it when old english in used within poetry especially love poetry. I felt the longing in this poem....such a good write!! |
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