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Oh God!
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emystar
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 11:54:43 PM in AEST
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His Love Shines So Bright
Like A Beacon Shines
Upon A Stormy Night. | |
SultryRose's Signatures
Now I'm ready for
some joy.
Need it now,
Oh boy!
Not use to
thinken 'bout me.
Demons are gone
but what 'bout me?
Oh God!
It's time for joy
bring it on.
So long I've stood
strong
but now need help
along.
repeat.
Now as hearts,
minds merge need joy
got that urge.
Hold me fast
I'm trying to stand.
Now I need your
helping hand.
Oh yeah, thanks
for strangers to care.
Now need help to
get me there.
this mountain's steep
keep me steady,
please.
ya'll I'm fine today so please don't worry bout me.
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emystar
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Re: Oh God!
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 03:43:05 AM AEST (User
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His Love Shines So Bright
Like A Beacon Shines
Upon A Stormy Night.
Amen to this prayer Emy you have such a delightful way of writing. Your poems go so deep. I was surprised that this poem has not been commneted on. Hugs from bernard.
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Re: Oh God!
(User Rating: 1 ) by little_genna on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 12:10:18 PM AEST (User
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Im with bernard on this one!
That prayer was short but amazing. As for your poem well words do it no justice!
nice one
hugs
Genna xx |
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Re: Oh God!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 02:58:07 AM AEST (User
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Another beautiful write, dear friend. I love this one as well, its so full of hope and faith, but its sad as well. Written to perfection, m'dear.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Oh God!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:39:06 PM AEST (User
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you just keep on impressing me emy. this would make a brilliant song. =] |
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Re: Oh God!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 01:00:58 PM AEST (User
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This is really awesome, it has a lot of hope to it.
Scott |
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Re: Oh God!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:37:57 PM AEST (User
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Yes Becca is right emystar. This would make a great song of praise for God.
So much childlike trust and love, I am sure His heart is overjoyed to hear you sing so beautifully for Him and fellowman.
You are infectious.!
Love and hugs
E;lizabeth |
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