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My beautiful flower...
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 11:32:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Walking through the meadow
as I usually do
Strolling happily as I think
of you
Picking pretty flowers as
I go
But there's one pretty flower
That reminds me of you so
I pick up the flower and
place it in my hand
Gazing dreamingly at it
I'm in wonderland
For it takes away my breath and
Steals away my heart
For its beauty captivating
This flower's every part
It reminds me of you in
alot of ways
Delicate, beautiful, fragile
as it lays
Dormant it stays within my
hands
While you're in far away lands
This pretty flower I picked so
that you know
You'll always be in my heart
Where ever you may go
Copyright ©
mina-1
... [
2005-03-02 23:32:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My beautiful flower...
(User Rating: 1 ) by jmpy84 on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 11:33:57 PM AEST (User
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another wonderful write |
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Re: My beautiful flower...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 12:27:43 AM AEST (User
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A breezy write...
sweet-sounding and wistful.
Keep writing. |
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Re: My beautiful flower...
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:54:18 AM AEST (User
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Brought tears 2 my eyes this is beautiful ty 4
this masterpeice . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: My beautiful flower...
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 01:05:59 PM AEST (User
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that was so lovely, beautiful,
pix xx |
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Re: My beautiful flower...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:32:57 PM AEST (User
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heartfelt, and the sweetness rang true -
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