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Fantine
Contributed by
NewsFromNowhere
on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:41:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Consume these contours, flesh wound peepholes.
Bruises adored, amour procured.
Purgatory comes, sins in their millions
scratch and attach their soft hooks of misery.
My sex your confessional, unrobe thy priest!
Perish with me, sweet habitué.
Eyelids are cloaking, hate in a glass case.
Fragments of spring, in gin soaked reverie,
hold me while I yearn for him to burn,
burn and return. To me. Jezebel’s saviour.
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2005-03-02 22:41:22]
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Re: Fantine
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 06:48:51 AM AEST
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| I . . . am . . . confused. |
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Re: Fantine
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 08:55:43 AM AEST
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Im rather confused too...
* Shrugs *
Jane |
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Re: Fantine
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:36:00 AM AEST
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Its written well and flows smoothly. I hate to admit that i'm confused too... but then the best poems are those that have you sat there thinking for hours... and this is going to do that exceptionally well.
Take care
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Re: Fantine
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 06:39:45 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. Nice work. |
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