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Gutter Lords And Human Shards
Contributed by
darkremains
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 09:55:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Active, complacent
each way adjacent.
Can I stand which way i'm facing?
Not if you are king.
Gutter lords and human shards.
Rip the working class apart
and a view from my stale heart
casts cholesterol visions
and I feel sick
at your stink
My futile attempts at interaction
are wearing me thin.
I give up
i'ts doing me in
Ethic minority.
We are superiority.
Copyright ©
darkremains
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2005-03-02 21:55:26]
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Re: Gutter Lords And Human Shards
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:56:02 PM AEST
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| Amazingly angry,I really enjoyed it. |
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Re: Gutter Lords And Human Shards
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:06:12 PM AEST
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Nice write. Lots of emotion shining through.....I love the title and the line in the poem. Good job!
Carol |
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Re: Gutter Lords And Human Shards
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 01:03:37 PM AEST
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| this is a fascinating poem it is expressed greatly with your good use of vocabulary.i love it |
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