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Madness Unwinds
Contributed by
Quilted_rag_doll
on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 05:21:18 PM in AEST
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This rope to which I,
Grasp so tight.
Snaps beneath my fingers,
As I slip into the night.
It unravels within my hands,
As I drop to my knees.
Consumed by the darkness,
I drift off to sea.
The sea of my mind,
In which I am alone.
Ripped from my sanity,
Cast on this throne.
This throne of despair,
Topped by a crown of madness.
A staff of desolation,
And a robe of sadness.
I struggle, I fight,
To rip them all off.
The Joker just laughs at me,
The voices all scoff.
I clamp my hands,
Over my ears.
Wishing it all away,
Spilling unknown tears.
As if my tears formed a river,
Silence washes over me.
Engulfed in my nightmare,
I saw what could not be.
As I wake from myself,
I shake my head.
And opening my eyes,
I am filled with dread.
Iron chains hold me,
To a seat of steel.
I can't move an inch,
This is unreal!
But what is real, and what is not?
When you’re a prisoner to your own mind.
Forsaken by your sanity,
Madness unwinds.
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Quilted_rag_doll
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2005-03-02 17:21:18]
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Re: Madness Unwinds
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by mnk_1112 on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 07:11:30 PM AEST
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| hey-- incredable images. way to leave it in a way unended as well. excellent write! |
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Re: Madness Unwinds
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 07:35:01 PM AEST
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wow good poem I loved how it flowed... you
captured insanity quite well. The title really
captured my attention and yeah I shall shut up
and go read it again.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Madness Unwinds
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 07:49:06 PM AEST
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So true but u r not alone as I think we all have our moments of insanity.
It's a masterpeice cause every one of can relate if we're honest.
Jus get a grip and ride the waves.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Madness Unwinds
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:23:00 PM AEST
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| fantastic poem. especially since it held my attention the entire time. most poems cant even succeed in holding it past the first line anymore. |
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Re: Madness Unwinds
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by tractorbabe on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:38:13 PM AEST
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| amazing ..very desriptive i love it...u have great talents |
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Re: Madness Unwinds
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by pixie on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 01:09:16 PM AEST
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great poem, I could see everything you expressed,
pix xx |
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