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Harshreality
Contributed by
harshreality
on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:43:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I can't sleep-
Its just one of those nights...
So many memories weighing on my mind.
Time changes everything,
Leaving only pieces behind;
All those moments that meant so much to me...
Now, tattered and torm apart-
Nothing but desperate dreams;
Trapped within a broken heart...
You've let me go.
You closed your eyes tonight,
And fell right to sleep;
You don't even know...
Everytime mine shut,
I see beautiful pieces of you and me.
I don't know which is worse-
Facing a past that will never come to be,
Or having to lie awake...
In this harshreality
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harshreality
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2005-03-02 14:43:17]
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Re: Harshreality
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:48:06 PM AEST
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sometimes reality is too harsh to face, you expressed this well in your write,
pix xx |
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Re: Harshreality
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by helianthus on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 04:28:21 PM AEST
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| Why are you still feeling this way? Is this still the same relationship? "Everytime mine shut, I see beautiful pieces of you and me." I love this line. |
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Re: Harshreality
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:54:45 PM AEST
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amazing write sweetheart,
it choked me up just reading it..
Wayne |
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