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My Angel
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:34:23 PM in AEST
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You are my angel & so much more,
Thank you for opening up the door,
You have spread your wings around me,
I am grateful you are helping setting me free.
You are so beautiful in every single way,
Your beauty grows with each passing day,
To have love & hold it in my hands,
Makes me strong to walk across all lands.
To have you lie next to me so close,
Is one of the things that matters most,
Your touch means more than expensive things,
You are the gift that happiness brings.
You shine so bright, so very bright,
You held onto me helped me through the night,
Love flows from you, flows into my heart,
I couldn’t imagine us ever being apart.
Your soul is pure your hearts made of gold,
You pulled me into your arms out of the cold,
You are my angel from the skies,
With you forever is where my heart & soul lies.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-03-02 14:34:23]
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Re: My Angel
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:05:02 PM AEST
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A gem of a poem in your true loving fashion
beautiful as always pixie . . .
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Re: My Angel
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:16:11 PM AEST
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What a beautiful compasionate write. I liked this a lot.
Great write as always Krissie
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Re: My Angel
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 05:22:01 PM AEST
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Very romantic, plus a very nice flow and rhythum. I really liked the last two lines
"You are my angel from the skies,
With you forever is where my heart & soul lies"
Awesome lines and wonderful poem
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Re: My Angel
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 06:38:41 PM AEST
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a very nice poem. each stanza flows well and the rhythm is really good. i liked it alot.
my favourite stanza is :
"You shine so bright, so very bright,
You held onto me helped me through the night,
Love flows from you, flows into my heart,
I couldn’t imagine us ever being apart."
well done you really captured the subject well
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Re: My Angel
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 08:18:08 PM AEST
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beautiful Krissie you poured your heart into
this one and wove it into a beautiful work of
art. Thanks for sharing this with us I enjoyed it
immensely.
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