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Did You Know
Contributed by
xtremcalibur
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 05:30:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Did you know that heaven has many gates
Special ones are opened to those not responsible for their fate
Premature deaths; the murdered and raped
Death before their first breathe
Life taken by simple mistakes
A child taken from us in the middle of the night
By disease; by starvation; by neglect.
Did you know that God had a plan
This I am told but can't understand
He gave us these beautiful gifts
Leaving us empty within
We are bereaved with our most precious losts
Asking him why it has to be
I think he took them; he needed them too
So through the special gates these babes will go
An eternity not filled with pain, sorrow, and hate
But eternal love and wonderment
We have not yet experienced at all
One day when you time has come
These perfected beings
Will greet and welcome you in.
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xtremcalibur
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2005-03-02 05:30:56]
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Re: Did You Know
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 05:47:45 AM AEST
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A very pretty, powerfull masterpeice.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Did You Know
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 06:01:50 AM AEST
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What a spectacular write, this was simply done to perfection.
Each stanza fits together and bonds so well, you really have writen something so beautiful.
Great write and thanks for posting.
Jane @)->--- |
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Re: Did You Know
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 07:05:17 AM AEST
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| A truly wonderful poem. |
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Re: Did You Know
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 09:58:51 AM AEST
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So beautiful,
God does have a plan for us all and many of us never quite understand it. I don't understand his plan for me but I also do not question him.
This poem holds perfection just like a new born baby does. |
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Re: Did You Know
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by rockstarr12747 on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 11:46:40 AM AEST
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i loved your poem it was he truth and truth is beautiful and keep up your good work
CRYSTAL |
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Re: Did You Know
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 04:40:06 PM AEST
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Hmn. That's one perspective.
Interesting. |
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Re: Did You Know
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:26:48 AM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL! |
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