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A death of my innocence
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:30:10 AM in AEST
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A death of my innocence
Brought on by never ending corruptions
I still remember when
I was pure
That was long ago
Now I'm tainted
By life's natural darkness
There is a void within me
Where my innocence used to dwell
I'm always trying to fill it
Each time i try
It seems like
The emptiness expands
Whats left of my childhood
Decays away
I am now forced to confront corruption
To even take part in it
Quick pleasures
Consume me now
Slowly destroying me
A feeling of apathy overwhelms me
Watching as my world goes by
Still dwelling on old memories
Wishing i could relive them
Despising people
Who think they still have hope
Secretly wanting
To be just like them
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2005-03-02 02:30:10]
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Re: A death of my innocence
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:50:16 AM AEST
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i am swooned by this piece and the dark themes which you have cleverly incorporated.
I feel that I have lived in this state for a long while now and can relate to almost every concept, displayed.
This was an incredible piece.
Unforgettable. |
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Re: A death of my innocence
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:52:35 AM AEST
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A very powerfull masterpeice!
It's very thought provoking and also inspiring as it opwns the mind.
huggs,
smiles,
emy |
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Re: A death of my innocence
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 05:01:25 AM AEST
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oh so true .
an amazing write. |
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Re: A death of my innocence
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by Naveen on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 06:02:19 AM AEST
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Nice and amazing
Lifes infernal truths
Where that innocence
I still missed
Thats great one |
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Re: A death of my innocence
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 11:08:22 PM AEST
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| Amazing, the only word I can find to describe this piece. |
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