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Free
Contributed by
jmpy84
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 01:06:04 AM in AEST
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Please wake me when I am free
I can not bear to live in captivity
I want to release the animal inside of me
Please release me from my cage
I feel like I’m on stage day and night
I can’t stand to live this way
One day it maybe
That day will be for me
That day I will become free
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2005-03-02 01:06:04]
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Re: Free
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 01:46:48 AM AEST
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| this was a pretty neat read, I've felt like this before....good write |
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Re: Free
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:08:55 AM AEST
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I hear every word loud-n-clear!
Very powerfull as we all feel so chained at times.
A masterpeice.
huggs, smile, hope, peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Free
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:58:57 PM AEST
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A great write. Powerful and strong.
I hear you dear friend for I feel like this alot of the times. Nicely written |
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