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tainted heart
Contributed by
dizza_13
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 01:00:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You say your losing control,
Everyday its seems your life is up and down,
You’re always looking for a purpose,
Everywhere you look it just cant be found.
Now you've been tainted by love,
Someone breaks your heart with no good reason why,
So you say that you'll never love another,
Your hearts not a game it’s not a toy to try.
But when i'm with you,
There’s something there I know you feel it too,
Maybe its time you opened up to me,
Cos if you don’t ever try then you will never see.
I'm searching, trying to find the answer,
But we never can find it, it always fades away,
It’s a hard journey on the way to love,
But don’t let your doubt win cos i’m here to stay.
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dizza_13
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2005-03-02 01:00:38]
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Re: tainted heart
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:29:27 AM AEST
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awesome write,i felt ur emotions,l=hoping the best for u and this lucky someone!!!keep up the great writes
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Re: tainted heart
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 03:23:04 PM AEST
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The rawness to this write reminds me of my earlier work. I like the feeling to this piece...It's determined, positive, and yet grounded...The latter often being a contradiction with love...Good spill...Keep it up!
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