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Facing the Truth
Contributed by
Mesano
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:44:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Facing the truth that I have feared,
Is more a challenge than it seems,
Dreading each day as it neared,
Broken hearts and shattered dreams.
Seeing a light, a small path of hope,
But knowing the truth and living a lie,
Lurking in shadows, decieving and cloaked,
The truth revealed - too painful to cry.
My thoughts blurred - I'm confused,
Unsure, uncertain of what I'm to do,
Waiting until the pain has subdued,
I think of my dragon and pull myself through.
Copyright ©
Mesano
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2005-03-01 22:44:01]
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Re: Facing the Truth
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by ruthie1983 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 11:21:29 PM AEST
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| i like this poem cuz its short and it gets to the point. |
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Re: Facing the Truth
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 04:00:32 AM AEST
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Awesome.
huggs,
emy
keep the faith. |
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Re: Facing the Truth
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 04:42:18 PM AEST
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Thank you for your comments on my poems
they mean more than you know. As for your
poem I really liked it and I can relate to it quite
a bit. I think I liked the 2nd stanza the best
although they were all quite good. Keep up
the writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Facing the Truth
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by sicknivesevered on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 11:54:55 PM AEST
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| Very good write. I love the last line. (^_^)b |
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