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Wanted death
Contributed by
vycky
on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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"I would give her back to restore my family," the words echoed through her ears.
She got up from where she had lay...
and walked toward the darkness that called...
Into her parents room she walked...
with tears rolling down her cheeks...
Those words sliced her heart as she walked..
She reaches for her friend that will help her through...
She spoke"It's all up to you..."
"Please don't fail me now...I've come so far."
She closes her eyes and opens her mouth...
"Finally," she thinks about.
A loud noise, then a flash of white...silence.
"Thank-you my friend," it all fades out.
Copyright ©
vycky
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2002-12-15 10:00:00]
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Re: Wanted death
(User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 03:46:24 PM AEST
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| this is really really good...the best one of yours that i read...i like it a lot, it's really good...well done... |
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Re: Wanted death
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by Patterz on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 06:08:38 PM AEST
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Wow, yet another incredible poem by you....kudos.....keep them coming
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