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Deadly thoughts running through your head,
Contributed by
EVERxSOxSWEET
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:31:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Deadly thoughts running through your head,
Each day you wake up with the same dread.
So you slice your wrist to end the pain,
Blood rushing out as your skin is being slain.
All you wanted was to be happy at last!
But death is approaching you so fast.
You say you cant go on, Its all to tough.
You think life is terrible and you've had enough.
Your loosing a race against the clock
Your bodys shaking, going into shock
Now its lying near lifeless on the floor,
Your hearts not beating much anymore...
But never give up, If you believe it,
Then you can achieve it.
Think of all you have to live for,
Your family, friends, your goals, and more.
Remember theres always a light,
Keep on striving, and never loose your sight.
When you think you cant live till tomorrow,
Try to push away all of your sorrow.
Hurting yourself is never right,
Dont do it to yourself, You've got to fight.
You grasp up the blade, but you must stop,
Unclench your fist and just let it drop.
The meaning of life may not yet be clear,
But its all you have, its precious and dear.
Theres many things others will never know,
But you must hold on..and never, never let go...
Copyright ©
EVERxSOxSWEET
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2005-03-01 22:31:01]
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Re: Deadly thoughts running through your head,
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:32:24 PM AEST
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| hmm..i named this 'never let go'.. guess something didnt work..oh well..sorry. |
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Re: Deadly thoughts running through your head,
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by CAUGHTinAdream on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 08:32:16 PM AEST
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Wow kay...I dont even kno what to say...this poem is so awesome! It seriously is one of the best poems ive read. I remember u showing me the beginning of it. I really love this, im sure u and kasey will get great reviews or whatever for ur project. Awesome job!
Love ya,
Kristen |
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