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no hope
Contributed by
karmen
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:25:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Look in the dark,
deep in the dark,
over in the corner.
Do you see her?
There sits the child,
the child of no hope.
Shes been given up on,
and pushed away.
Now here she sits,
all alone in the corner,
of the darkest room known.
Day and night,
she sits crying,
yet there are no tears.
Shes stuck there,
with the deepest fear to move.
For if she leaves,
where is she to then go?
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-03-01 22:25:12]
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Re: no hope
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 01:49:44 PM AEST
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i like i like its very good
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Re: no hope
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:31:52 PM AEST
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nice poem. i like. i can also relate. this girl* also needs to find safe places. i know i have about 3. i may not always be happy at them, but i'm comfortable in these places. So this girl* should find places. with friends might work too.
~sprinter27
p.s. keep up the good writing. |
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