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Open Up
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:05:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Don't push me away
I'm trying to help
Why won't you open your withered heart to me?
I won't hurt you
Like all the others
I want to heal you
I know I can never give back those lost memories
But I can make new ones
Better ones
Please let me in
Dreams may fill you with lost hope
But I will give you real hope
Real dreams
Don't run away
Please don't hide
Come out of your shell
And into my arms
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2005-03-01 22:05:19]
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Re: Open Up
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by heartquake on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:13:34 PM AEST
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| great write... thats exactly what everyone in the world needs to hear from someone at least once in their life... i know it would have helped me out to hear that from a loved one in the past... |
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Re: Open Up
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 11:13:49 PM AEST
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Nuthing corney bout this write.
A masterpeice in my eyes but It's so much easier said than done.
huggs,
emy |
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