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Rock Bottom
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm not looking.
I'm just standing on my own,
But if you happen to catch my eye
Your welcome to stand with me.
I know that I won’t have to lean on you,
That I am strong enough to depend on my self.
And if you happen to make me fall for you
You’re welcome to enjoy the free falling with me.
Wind in our hair, smiles on our faces.
If I happen to fall in love in mid-air……
I know that rock bottom won’t be too far.
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xxbreathlessx
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2005-03-01 20:11:08]
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by the_mouse_that_roared on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:37:49 PM AEST
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| I liked the strength in this and the ending is oh so true. Great work |
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by TeenageDirtbag on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:04:39 PM AEST
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| Aw! This is cute ^ ^ I should send it to my boyfriend...it conveys everything so perfectly. |
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