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LOVE
Contributed by
rockstarr12747
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:58:42 PM in AEST
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InternetLove
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Love is what people say hurts
Love is what people say is pain
Love is what people say is insane
Love is what people say die
Love is full of lies
But some peoplehave good loves
And they seem to sore with the doves
Love is not always bad
But love can be very sad
But keep your head held high
And don't you sigh
Because love will come to you
In everything that you do.
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2005-03-01 19:58:42]
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Re: LOVE
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by the_mouse_that_roared on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:42:11 PM AEST
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A very concise explanation of love. You seem to have it down pat. I think you meant soar instead of sore though. Great work all in all.
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Re: LOVE
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by assassinatorgirl on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 07:43:44 PM AEST
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| that was sweet, i like it. |
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