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Broken Wing

Contributed by lilch4ever on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

A bird without wings can't fly.
A bird with a broken wing has a broken soul.
One can't fly or leaves it nest.
He feels he'll never fly again.
Remembering once soaring through the sky and playing about.
Singing happily and enjoying wings in which to fly.
Now watching all fellow buddies fly out into the world.
Sad and hurt watching many of your kind all soaring through the sky.
None helping or lending a wing in which to help in anyway.
Soaring through the sky was is only life.
A life he enjoyed but it vanished into thin air, along with many others that come before him.
Parents yelling join the rest, get out more.
Never noticing that poor little wing which hurts so much.
He feels invisiable.
He feels torn by his broken soul, knowing that he'll never feel or live again.
Asking do one deserve this hurtful pain of a broken wing.
Looking back at times when you weren't very nice.
Seeing birds in need and never lending that helpful wing which is now broken.
Many chances to make things right but ignored all the signs.
No body helps to heal that broken wing.
Crying in pain but no simpathy is brought.
Feeling alone but feeling one deserves.
Praying for God to heal ones broken wing so you may soar once more.
Telling that one has learned his lesson.
Prayer was grandite and the bird soared once more.
But this time helping all that is in need.
Thanked God for restoring his broken wing and a second chance to help others, and to soar once more.

Written 12/5/02.

Copyright © lilch4ever ... [ 2002-12-15 09:00:00]
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Re: Broken Wing (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:50:09 AM AEST
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Very well written I liked this one!Christina

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