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My Words
Contributed by
freckle
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:49:58 PM in AEST
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My Words
The words I speak
mean nothing
and of course,
everything
I speak what I see
what I feel
what I love
what makes me sick
Whispers
or
SHOUTS
with giggles
or tears
The words
though full
of lies
May hold
the truth
of who
I am.
Carol
2/28/05
Copyright ©
freckle
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2005-03-01 19:49:58]
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Re: My Words
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by rockstarr12747 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:03:35 PM AEST
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Caral this is a deep but likeing poem keep up the work
CRYSTAL |
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Re: My Words
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:14:13 PM AEST
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i think this is great. i love how you end with
"The words
though full
of lies
May hold
the truth
of who
I am."
i think that is a great analysis on your part and is put into great wording. you did a godd job here. keep writing.
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Re: My Words
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by Rhymingron on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:19:21 PM AEST
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| Neat poem |
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Re: My Words
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:34:48 PM AEST
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I throughly enjoyed reading your poem Carol.
Beautifully written and expressed. Thanks 4 sharing |
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Re: My Words
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by Les4567 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:32:23 PM AEST
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Very nice poem. I really liked it Carol.
Keep up the goos work!!
~Leslie |
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