|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
You
Contributed by
heartbroken4ever
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:30:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
I'm here right now without you by my side
longing for a place where I can hide
I need to be in your arms
just to know that you'll protect me from any harm
My eyes are filled with tears
and I'm afraid I'm going to have to soon face my biggest fear
That fear would be you saying good-bye
how that woulld make me cry
I love you so much
and long for yout touch
I couldn't live with out you in my life
and to get you back I'd make any sacrafice
I'd don't ever want you to go
I swear I love you more than you know
Baby your a dream come true
and without you I'd always be blue
So baby please don't leave
because your all I need
Copyright ©
heartbroken4ever
... [
2005-03-01 19:30:57]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: You
(User Rating: 1 )
by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:41:52 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This, kind of made me sad.. But not so much.. I did think it was very good, I feel I can relate. So keep writing, because you are very good at it...
Hugs N Stuff,
**Britnee** |
|
|
Re: You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Marisa_A_Sydney on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:59:08 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this is really great. i can sooooooooo totally relate to this. i know exactly how this feels.. it hurts i know. don't worry, trust in God and everything'll be ok. take my advice. |
|
|
Re: You
(User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:13:57 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I'm not going to say good bye...I hate those words...Beautiful poem Amber....I'm not going to leave....
Clark |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
