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When I Look At You
Contributed by
JennyR
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:15:18 PM in AEST
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When you look at me,What do you see?,
Is it a hot gil or is it just being me?.
Well when i see you,you make me feel warm,
And when i say warm i also mean you holding me during a storm.
I look in your Graceful eyes,
And my Heart SLOWLY dies.
Everytime you say Good-Bye,
I start to Break Down And Cry!.
Peopl wonder why im even like this,
My answer is you always make me feel bliss.
I gave my heart and soul to you,
I did that because you make me feel loved when I look at YOU!.
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JennyR
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Re: When I Look At You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:30:47 PM AEST
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| honest and sweet. |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:40:26 PM AEST
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Very beautifull It shows how someone can let go completely and trust.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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