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Imaginary You
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 06:40:55 PM in AEST
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Hidden evil awaits me
I close my eyes to my sancuary
Death comes and I flee
As I open my soul to your..misery
I succumb to a lifeless sate
Where I cannot be found
I lie here alone, awake
For fear, I make not a..sound
Eyes watch me
Penetrating into my..soul
Find these forsaken emotions
That make my heart so..cold
Find all the answers
To all the questions that you..ask
Realize this is the present
So stop living in the..past
Walk on this thinning rope
As I stand close behind you
Pushing slightly, death is calling
All along I was thought you were..true
A figment of my imagination
Why does it feel so real?
I once trusted you with what I felt
Now Im forced to forever..conceal
Eyes watch me
Penetrating into my..soul
Find these forsaken emotions
That make my heart so..cold
Find all the answers
To all the questions that you..ask
Realize this is the present
So stop living in the..past
(Repeat Chorus until fades out)
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Daniels_Princess
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2005-03-01 18:40:55]
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Re: Imaginary You
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:04:26 PM AEST
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Nice song. Really sad though. I hope you are not feeling this way.
Scott |
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Re: Imaginary You
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:27:15 PM AEST
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| very well written! i do agree with scott..its sad but its interesting. plus these kind lof things only make you stronger. anyways i love the imagery you put into this poem and how you describe what you feel so well. keep writing! |
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Re: Imaginary You
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by weezer21 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:37:29 PM AEST
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thats a really really well written song.. i've been there b4 and its really...horrible..great lyrics
**jessi** |
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Re: Imaginary You
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by Daniels_Princess on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 04:54:45 PM AEST
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| Thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it..and Im glad you three liked it..And, unfortunately..Scott, yea..these last few days have just been plain sh*tty |
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