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Relieve Me
Contributed by
CAUGHTinAdream
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 06:34:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I can't think straight
My thoughts are in my way
Relieve me from this hell
Please just take me away.
I cried myself to sleep
Did you know that you're the cause?
I look at me, then hold my breath
Praying my life would go on pause.
I can't take it
With these emotions I cannot deal
Please take me away
My reality is all too real.
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2005-03-01 18:34:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Relieve Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 06:43:47 PM AEST (User
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Good write. I really liked the flow of it. |
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Re: Relieve Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 11:13:40 PM AEST (User
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Good poem, fit together nicely, i enjoyed it. your welcome to view some of mine if you like! |
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