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You Were Always There!
Contributed by
xtremcalibur
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:58:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Where were the angels
When I screamed out in the night
Did you hear this little girl's plea
Did you even care.
You don't have to do this
What is driving you
Is it your demons deep within
Is it really you?
Did you know that I cried in the middle of the night
I whispered to God to take my life
I thought he wasn't listening
To but a little child.
The angels were listening
They celebrated my strength
Brushed away my tears
Singing melodies to comfort my pain.
And dear God
I never realized that you were always there
And yes, you did take my life
I just didn't know.
The questions have diminished some
The pain still remains
Tucked deep within
Through the loving hands of God, I will be healed.
Copyright ©
xtremcalibur
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2005-03-01 16:58:56]
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Re: You Were Always There!
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:20:09 PM AEST
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| A very interesting poem, from a very interesting secret. good write. |
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Re: You Were Always There!
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 04:58:02 AM AEST
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Very amazingly sad and emotional poem.
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Re: You Were Always There!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:28:28 AM AEST
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| Lovely write. So much emotion in each word. Great work. |
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Re: You Were Always There!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 04:48:33 AM AEST
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I can so relate.
Very touching, deep, strong write.
huggs,
emy |
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