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Please Leave Me Alone
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:27:02 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Please leave me alone I’ve had enough,
You have proved I’m not that tough,
But I am weak & I fall apart,
I can not hold together my own heart.
Once the tears start they will not stop,
They fall down my face drop by drop,
My soul turns blue with all my pain,
In this torment only heartache will gain.
I want to be happy now so leave me alone,
You are powerful to me you have shown,
I can not see you neither can I touch,
But you have hurt me, hurt me so much.
You love to see me as I sit here & cower,
You have destroyed the beauty of my flower,
I can’t hold on to anything anymore,
I have fallen forever onto the dirty floor.
Please, please can you go easy on me?
Can you consider setting my soul free?
I am in love all I want is to be allowed,
To once & forever disappear from you into the crowd.
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pixie
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2005-03-01 15:27:02]
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Re: Please Leave Me Alone
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:43:44 PM AEST
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| This is like a beautiful and sad song...I still love your poetry. Surrendering in this way is so hard, and someone so powerful is heart-wrenching when it doesn't work the way you want. I know that all too well. Nice write, pixie...Tiffany J. |
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Re: Please Leave Me Alone
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:48:25 PM AEST
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| Quite a change from the last poem I visited of yours! This one was full of despair - you captured it well. |
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Re: Please Leave Me Alone
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:36:32 PM AEST
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Written with such sadness... I loved the 2nd
stanza it just tore me apart inside and just the
whole poem, but yeah I hope you aren't
actually feeling like this. Keep yer chin up and
keep on writing like this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Please Leave Me Alone
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:20:12 PM AEST
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| Awww pix it really tears me apart when i see you write such a sad and emotional write like this.so well express.Need to talk pm me me ok.take care |
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Re: Please Leave Me Alone
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by hoist1atca on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 06:50:47 PM AEST
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Very nice write Pixie-
I find that even if the pain goes away (the person so to speak) there is always a memory left behind to rent space in my head and my heart-
I hope for you this is not a personal poem frome experiance-
Joe |
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Re: Please Leave Me Alone
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 06:56:18 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write! It was full of so much sadness, but it was so beautifully written. Each stanza just flowed right into the other. Great work. |
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Re: Please Leave Me Alone
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:51:53 PM AEST
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Such a sad and emotional write Pixie.
You can feel your pain from the words you write.
The poem flowed really well and it was superbly written.
Chin up sweet girl. |
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Re: Please Leave Me Alone
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by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 12:36:51 AM AEST
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Awwww Pix. *Hugs tightly* This poem is so sad. I'm on Msn now if you need me.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Please Leave Me Alone
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 11:19:26 AM AEST
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WOW pixie this is a great poem!
My friend was sitting beside me when I read this poem and she loved it so much she wanted me to send the poem to her.
She and I both were very touched.
GREAT WRITE!
*~GIVINGIN~* |
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Re: Please Leave Me Alone
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by catz77 on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 08:35:22 PM AEST
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great write
i liked it
leizabeth |
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