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Melancholy Feeling
Contributed by
Red_October
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 02:48:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Out of my control ~ Destiny ~
Isn't this so?
The melancholy feeling
of a weathered final soul
is only the touch that cuts the cold...
Now is in your past ~ Already ~
In our memories, isn't it true?
We don't have much to say,
much less freedom to choose...
Suffer quietly ~ Whispering ~
Is that what you do?
Maybe its reflection
Is something else to you...
Now we know the ending ~ Destiny ~
Isn't this so?
It's that melancholy feeling
of letting each other go...
Copyright ©
Red_October
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2005-03-01 14:48:45]
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Re: Melancholy Feeling
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by neveryours on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:17:33 PM AEST
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This had a nice quality to it, and some original formatting.
Liked the thoughts involved as well. |
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Re: Melancholy Feeling
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:29:44 PM AEST
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A gripping poem. I loved the line "now is in
your past ~ Already ~" i thought the little ~
were kind of distracting, but it was unique. I
also liked how the poem ended. Good write...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Melancholy Feeling
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by SugimotoYouki on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 11:37:33 PM AEST
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I guess if you could've heared my sigh when I finnished reading this would've told you everything you'd need to know....
this is so beautyfully dreamy and melanchonic...
even though it's quite sad it somehow still creates sucha peaceful atmosphere...
Thanks for this wonderful piece of work |
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