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43
Contributed by
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:58:00 PM in AEST
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Yellow smoke signals
Element of surprise
Away it flows from me
A fluidized demise
Look back to see ahead
Usurped by what you dread
The end is never near
Soon ahead it is not
Away from fear
Alone you rot
Hide
Look back to see ahead
Usurped by this dread
Sleep
A code devised of division
Natural selection and sanctuary
Exist or exit, if you please
Hand on head, head in knees
Why look back to see ahead?
Usurped by what you dread
Failure I’m accustomed to
A customer of failing
Sleep
You look back to see ahead
Usurped by what you dread
Stop the survey and survey the stop signs
Signals and omitted communions
Realization hurts the mind
As tomorrow hides forever
There never was; never will be
My excuses exhausted from exploitation
Explain your exponents
Mind your ego
Politeness police pull a cheat code
Look back to see ahead
Usurped by what you haven’t decided
Hide still sleep, exponentially
And train your eyes
The politeness police
Devised architecture
Hierarchy or anarchy?
Look back
See what is mine?
It looks like the politeness police outran time
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Re: 43
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:12:58 PM AEST
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| I don't necessarily like to decipher anyone's poetic art, but I did want to comment. This is surreal...and I like it a lot. It makes my head spin. Tiffany J. |
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Re: 43
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by wolfman on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:19:37 PM AEST
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welcome to YPDC, here you are always home, so please do enjoy yourself.
well... you got me stumped, I have no idea what this is. but none the less this was well writen and very good, I can imagen that (for those who know what this is about) the language is very desrictive, the flow was nice, truthfully , not a fan of the rythm, but I still liked it very much, thank you for posting it. I will be reading this one again to see if I can figuer it out. tell then, be strong and God bless. do post again soon.
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