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i loved you *continued*

Contributed by purplestary on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:07:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

i went against your will
i took that one last breath
but confusion is setting in
and i think i'm still alive...

i inhale again
something isn't right
a drop of rain hits my face
and i know i'm still alive...

i'm afraid to open my eyes
i'm scared of seeing your face
my plan has went astray
why am i still alive?!

now you help me to my feet
and i look into your eyes
i see your concerned face
and I AM STILL ALIVE!

i have to keep on going
it must not be my time
all the envy and pain
i must still endure
i can't believe i'm still alive...

i'm just not meant to be
i do not understand
i'm forced to go on bleeding
and hurting all alone

it makes no sense at all
i have no reason to go on
but something kept me here
and i'm forced to stay alive....

*possible continuation of this one on the way as well....*

Copyright © purplestary ... [ 2005-03-01 13:07:07]
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Re: i loved you *continued* (User Rating: 1 )
by nabokovfan87 on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:29:32 PM AEST
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um this was ok just didnt know where it was going. try to force the reader to think the way u want them to. try to strengthen up the meaning in this....

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