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What No One Knows
Contributed by
Live2Die
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:52:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Thoughts flying through my head
Where no one can find them
Feelings locked into my chest
Where no one can see them.
My private worries,
My secret loves
My haunted nightmares,
My unknown lies
All hidden away
Never to be seen or heard.
From the farthest stranger
To the closest friend
Theres not a single person
Who knows everything.
My private worries,
My secret loves,
My haunted nightmares,
My unknown lies.
All hidden away
Never to be seen or heard.
Sitting in a room all alone
Wishing that just once
There is someone out there
Who knows the real me.
My private worries,
My secret loves,
My haunted nightmares,
My unknown lies.
All hidden away
Never to be seen or heard.
Copyright ©
Live2Die
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2005-03-01 08:52:02]
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Re: What No One Knows
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:00:21 AM AEST
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I can relate to this...
I have found though that if you dont open up people will never learn who the real you is.
But first you need to eastablish who the real you is for yourself.
i think every one feels this way at some point in their lifes....
This had a real nice flow to it and I found it enjoyable to read even with the sadness it holds. *hugs you*
Good luck with your future writes
Gen x |
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Re: What No One Knows
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:01:40 AM AEST
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| This is like a song and I think the words are true for all of us. Nice write. Tiffany J. |
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Re: What No One Knows
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by Rhymingron on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:58:57 AM AEST
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| This is real good. You,ve made a first step by sharing this poem. All the best to you. |
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Re: What No One Knows
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by xrockstheheart on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 12:40:58 PM AEST
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| it is a good morning and your poetry was part of that. so you seek fame keep writing like this and you'll get it |
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Re: What No One Knows
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:47:19 AM AEST
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| This one's great! I feel just the same way... And this poem beautifully expresses it. One of your better ones, and that says a lot. |
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