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Former Love To Dust
Contributed by
TikiGodAK
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:26:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Former love...
Gone now
Forever..
Will I find another?
Time will tell
It doesnt sell
With me..
I bleed
Blood ringed with
Pain
Hurt
Anger
Saddness
I miss you
Everyday
I hate you
Everyday
Why?
You left me without saying goodbye
You left me without reason
You left me without trying
You broke apart my family
You broke my heart
You tore my soul
I want you back
But I know its wrong
Your never coming back
My heart breaks
I write these words of sorrow
Words of hurt
Words of pain
I wish you could see it
See what you meant to me
See how much this hurt
I dont think you'd care
But I'd like to believe you would
Would you?
Or would you write me off as the same bastard you called me then...
I keep writing
Hoping
Dreaming
Yearning
For change..
For redemption
Maybe a second chance at what I failed at
Or maybe a new love to wash away the dust...the sand...the rubble..
Copyright ©
TikiGodAK
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2005-03-01 05:26:00]
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Re: Former Love To Dust
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 06:40:42 AM AEST
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Well friend we gotto all go thru our wash cycles, ya know but hang in there I betcha she wishes u the very best of things with your new luv.
Luv her like they ain't no tomorrow and hold like it neva gets dark and she'll be there thru it all but neva leave her alone to long cause she too might roam.
sory got carried away there.
Great ventin keep on the sunny side of life.
huggs,
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Re: Former Love To Dust
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:42:43 PM AEST
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| very well expressed. i love this. hang in there ... i can feel the pain in this... i relate to these feelings well. i dunno if it's because i've been there too or what. just keep on writin how you feel , soon it will be ok...your probably tired of hearing that though. but it's the truth. i love the ending..."or maybe a new love to wash away the dust...the sand...the rubble.." i wish you the best... |
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