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~Im scared I might want more~
Contributed by
wetnwild
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:50:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sit here in my lonely room
Trying to figure everything out
And when I think I finally know
My mind fills up with doubt
Sometimes I think I know the answers
But I never do
My head is filled with mass confusion
That no one would understand but you
It helps to write these words on paper
Cause I have no one with whome I can talk
But then it makes me so frustrated
So I go out and take a walk
I walk past a bunch of old memories
As daylight slowly turns to dusk
I look up at the bright white moon
And cant help but to think of us
I close my eyes and in my head I talk to you
Hopeing that maybe you can here
"I miss you Will, Im so incredibly scared"
As I gentley catch my tear
I get back home and sit at the table
Stareing at the back glass door
Is this what I want, memories?
Im scared I might want more
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wetnwild
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2005-03-01 04:50:48]
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Re: ~Im scared I might want more~
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:04:38 AM AEST
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Sometimes we all feel that way.
Its part of life.by the way great write. |
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Re: ~Im scared I might want more~
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:29:05 AM AEST
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A great masterpeice of much wisdom.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~Im scared I might want more~
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by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:53:56 AM AEST
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Solemn and beautiful, honest and piercing. Well done!
Laurie |
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Re: ~Im scared I might want more~
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:52:31 PM AEST
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| wow..this is an amazing write. i havn't seen somthing like this expressed so smoothly . you have a true talent. thank you for sharing this. |
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